Monday, January 28, 2013

Response to Assignment from Last Semester

Response to Assignment from Last Semester

     Last semester, one of my assignments was to write a compare or contrast essay.  I chose to write an essay that’s topic was the Arizona State Sun Devil Marching Band of 1950 to 2009.  It was a very interesting piece to write, but quite difficult being that there was very little information for me to utilize.  The essay was outlined to address first the directors of the band, then the styles of music chosen for the ensemble, then the amount of community involvement.  It was a very straight forward and informative piece.

     The Logos of the piece was very simple.  First, to understand an organization, you must understand its leaders, so the beginning of the essay addressed that topic.  Then it moved into discussing the music and events that each ensemble participated in, showing how the directors ideas influenced them.  The logical flow if the information was more appealing to the reader, as they did not have to work as hard to sort the given information.

     The Ethos of the piece was well held.  All factual evidence given was cited by viable references.  The information was also surrounded by personal examples that made the reader believe the information, not just as facts on paper, but also as a real life effect on the band.

     The Pathos of the piece was nonexistent.  There was no need for an emotional appeal for the reader to fully understand the information or the purpose.  The only emotional aspect of the piece was discussed in the section about the style of music played by the band, but the emotions discussed were blatantly stated and were not intended to have an effect on the reader.

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